I can’t think of what to say, or how to say it

So I went here, and “wrote” a poem:

I am vaporous against the water
Weird and invisible within the spirits
I sense glowing inspirations behind the mud
Damn! The sin must continue
We are damp beside the flowers
You ensnare yellow animals among the towers
Whoa! The day is dying
I am vaporous against the water
You expel peaceful faces over the virgin
Dig it! The Knight is good
wavering unseeing
a long way from home
an old passport
After how many voyages
a stranger
chase his dream
where he knew no-one

Feel free to discuss, if you can.

  1. #1 by Jim on April 2, 2007 - 12:56 pm

    Reminds me of an electric circuit analysis haiku I wrote several years ago:
    Kirchoff’s Voltage Law
    What could be more important?
    I’m thinking Ohm’s Law

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